This is my second annotation of a contents page. I find this page a bit boring because i think there is too much text on it and not enough colour. this has helped me to decide that i dont want alot of text on my contents page becuase it could stop my target audience from reading it. I also thought it was bad that one of the band members isnt looking at the camera when all the other are; it makes him look like he is not really a part of the band.
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